My Final Editing

It's the last posting on my blog. I finally finish to write my 700 words. I hope that you have appreciate all of my personnal post.


BLOG CONTENT: 8 post for a total of-> 737 words

My Peanut Butter Cup's

What we would do without a peanut butter cup's? My peanut butter cup is my best friends. He knows all of me. When I'm crying, my peanut butter cup always find the words to put me on track again. That's why I can count on him. He will probably die on march 14th/2010 because he is best before this date. I hope that he will survive because I really need him. I love you `` Bacon``.

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Snowboard

I started to do snowboard one week ago. The first time that I practised this sport, I found it very hard because you have to combine many things at the same time. The thing

that I prefer to do when I'm snowboarding is to take some hits and make figures in the air. I hope to became a better snowboarder and to do slalom perfectly.

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NFL PLAYOFF!

The team that I would like to win the Super Bowl is Baltimore. First of all, I would like this team win the Super Bowl because they are so spectalcular and they work very hard for winning each yard on the field. Secondly, this team have a very good running attack with an average of ten yards by run during there first playoff game. Finally, with their terrific defensive, they are invinsible. I hope that they will win the Super Bowl.

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What a player !

What about Alexander Ovechkin!

He is faster than most of all the NHL players !

He is stronger than most of all the NHL players!

He has the best wrist shot of the NHL!

He hits very hard!

He is spectalcular!

Well he is the best!

Nobody can beat him!

He have too much skill!

We can't stop him!

We will remember his name forever!

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New York

The place that I want to visit is the city of New York. I would like to visit New York for many reasons. First of all, I want to go there because I really like to do shopping and to buy some new stuff. Secondly, I am very attracted by picture and with all the buildings that it have there, I'm sure that I can do a lot of beautiful pictures. Finally, this city it's my way to have fun because it reliate all my hobbies together. Then, I hope to go there one day!

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Lacrosse

Lacrosse is very popular in Canada, so why not at my school? We never had a lacrosse team here in Donnacona. I think that we should try to integrate a lacrosse team at my school. Maybe that it will be as popular as hockey. Who know's?

I think that we should try to integrate lacrosse at my school because it's very similar as hockey and hockey is very popular at my school. I mean, it's almost the same game and almost all the same rules as hockey except the stick, the skates and the surface of where you play. So, if hockey is very appreciated at my school, I think that lacrosse would be appreciated too.

Secondly, I would like to convince my school to integrate lacrosse because it would encourage all the native person to practise their principal sport. It will also encourage the native religion and the native society. Then they will share their culture with us.

Finally, I think that we should have a lacrosse team at school because it's a kind of hockey game but in a gymnasium and we know that is very popular at my school. We know that hockey and lacrosse are very similar, did lacrosse would be as popular as hockey at my school ?

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